Write a spring poem

Glimpse

Winter warming

Ice into snow and toast than

misting

Winter melting

Shadow beside firelight

Swing

Chilly spring

frown of him invoking

gloaming

Twilight spring

Love in foggy morning

Buried

By the warming spring

Analysis:

Winter/warming

Ice to/snow and/toast then

misting

Winter/melting

Shadow/beside/firelight

Swing

Chilly/spring

frown of/him in/voking

gloaming

Twilight/spring

Love in/foggy/morning

Buried

By the/warming/spring

This poem is an elegy to mourn love. It includes trochaic monometer, trochaic diameter and trochaic trimeter. It has three tercet and one quatrain. The author uses many feminine rhyme (in -ing) to imply this poem is write form a girl’s point of view to describe her hidden love. The trochee also implies this love will have a bad ending because it is anticlimactic. Every diameter reflects the season of this stanza, trimeter exhibits movements of them, monometer reflects feelings of the girl. She met the boy and fell in to love at the first sight. His appear warmed her winter and melted the ice, she felt she is beside a firelight in winter. Ever small movement of him would cause big storm inside her heart, even a small frown would result sunset on her. Unfortunately, beauty always have a short lifetime, her love toward him fading during passing time, love went back into fog, the fire used to be melted winter ended in a warming spring. She final find the fire which melted winter is her love rather than him.